GCSE · English Language · AQA · Spec 8700
Citing evidence and quotation effectively
Anyone can write “experts agree” or “87% of people say”. So why does some evidence make you nod along, and some make you raise an eyebrow?
Sort the evidence
Which evidence would actually make you believe it?
A writer is arguing: “Riverton library should open on Sundays, because students need a quiet place to revise.” Pick each piece of evidence they could use, then decide where it belongs.
Still to sort
Trustworthy and on the point (0)
The reader can see where it came from, and it backs up this exact point.
Where the line is: It needs BOTH: details that let the reader trust it, and a close connection to the point. Lose either one and it drops out of this box.
A number with nothing to trust it by (0)
It might fit the point, but the reader has no way to check it.
Where the line is: The number may be about the right thing. What is missing is any sign of who produced it or when — so the reader has no reason to trust it.
Off the point (0)
It might be perfectly trustworthy, but it isn't about this point.
Where the line is: It may come with a source and a date, but it is not closely connected to the point being argued, so it cannot support it.
Riverton, its library and every name, number and organisation here are invented for practice.
Predict, then check
Same point, same student, same words to start with — only the way the quotation is used changes. (The student is invented.)
The writer's point: some students have nowhere quiet to work at home. Which sentence evidences that point better?
In their June 2023 report, AQA examiners observed that well-known quotations prepared before the exam and forced into Paper 2 arguments met with mixed success, and that students did best when they wrote freely on a topic they knew about and were interested in.
This is the kind of writing assessed in AQA GCSE English Language Paper 2, Section B: writing to present a viewpoint.
WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED
A quick recap of today's lesson.
Evidence only works when your reader can trust it and it fits your point. Dropping in a number, a name or a quotation is not enough on its own.
What you need to know
- Supporting your opinion with a knowledgeable expert's view can make persuasive writing more convincing, because readers are more inclined to accept the argument.
- Not every expert view helps: it carries more weight when the expert is named, has a job title that fits the topic, and the view is recent.
- Only credible statistics persuade. Show a statistic can be trusted by giving details such as its source or the organisation behind it and its date.
- Evidence must be relevant — closely connected to the point you are arguing or the question you are answering.
- An embedded quotation is woven into your own sentence. Keep quotations short and precise: they evidence a point better and keep your writing concise.
The big picture
Evidence only persuades when a reader can trust it and it fits the point. A knowledgeable expert's view makes readers more inclined to accept an argument, and it carries more weight when the expert is named, has a job title that fits the topic, and the view is recent. A statistic persuades only when it is credible, so give its source or organisation and its date. Every piece of evidence must be relevant: closely connected to the point you are arguing. Quotations work best short, precise and woven into your own sentence.
Key points
Worked example
Problem
A student is arguing that their town should add more cycle lanes. Improve the evidence in this paragraph: “We need more cycle lanes. An expert says cycle lanes are a good idea. 75% of people agree. As one cyclist said: ‘I ride to work every day and honestly the roads round here are frightening, especially on the roundabout by the station where the lorries come through, and I have nearly been knocked off more times than I can count.’” (Every name and number used below is invented.)
⚠ Watch out
Treating any number, name or quotation as evidence. “Studies show 90% agree”, “experts say” and a long famous quotation all LOOK like support, but a reader has no reason to trust the first two and the third may not fit your point at all.
Memory hook
Who, when, where from — and does it fit? Ask those four questions of every piece of evidence, the way a doubtful reader would.
Check yourself
A friend writes: “Loads of experts agree, and 83% of people back the idea.” What would you tell them to add to each piece of evidence — and why would it help?
Flashcards
(11)Why can backing your opinion with an expert's view make persuasive writing more convincing?
Does quoting any expert automatically strengthen an argument?
Why does an expert's job title need to fit the topic?
Is dropping a statistic into your writing enough to persuade?
How do you show a reader that a statistic can be trusted?
What does it mean for evidence to be relevant?
A statistic has a source and a date but is about a different issue. Does it support your point?
What is an embedded quotation?
Short quotation or long quotation — which evidences a point better?
You want to quote someone who said three long sentences. What do you use?
When should you choose the evidence for a persuasive argument?
Tap any card to flip it, or use Study as deck to go through them one at a time. In the full lesson these run as a spaced-repetition deck — you rate each card Hard, Good or Easy and the tricky ones keep coming back until they stick.
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